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i love you

My heart beats louder that thunder,
My eyes gaze full of wonder,
I love you is all I can think.

My knees shake my hands tremble,
My words fall apart they won’t assemble,
I love you is all that I feel.

You face looks worried your eyes look deep
These precious moments with you I will always keep
I love you I what I want to say

Afraid to confess my feelings, afraid of pain,
But being with you the feeling grows till it drives me insane
I love you pumps through my veins

I start to speak but trip over my words,
This fear is different not like my fear of birds
I love you is the hardest thing to say

With a stumble and a trip the words fall out,
You say them back with a smile not doubt,
I love you is what I said.

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i wrote this about my feelings before i told my boyfriend that i loved him!

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  • parntsoftwins
    November 7, 2007

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    I do love the wonderful flow of this poem. The feelings are so heartfelt and true. You really feel them when reading the poem. One thing I will suggest is just go back and spell check a few. Other than that it is great!!!!