I sing to you a Serenade,
With Springtime love in full parade
Love's passion shared while here we lay,
All in Love, this glorious day.
It seems all Nature's come along,
The birds enchant us with their songs,
And gazingly, eyes full of Love
Our souls sun-bathed from above.
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Loverly, Lover lie,
Watch the world around us fly.
Lover Lie, Let's be as One--
'Till the setting of the Sun!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
In this Springtime Utopia,
Virtual Cornucopia
The fullness of Love's Blossomed rose,
We to each, their Love disclose.
So sing ye long, into the night,
As well we share full love's delight.
This special moment won't last long,
But Forever is Love's Song!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Lover lie, Loverly,
Oh you mean the world to me!
Loverly, Lover lie
With me 'till the day we die!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Author notes
Picture credit: From
www.augustholland.com/early_prints/serenade.jpg
A contest entry
- Serenade by second-born.
600 points, ended November 23, 2007, 18 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Enter All Your Love Writes Here! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
300 points, ended March 8, 2008, 306 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Anything kind or truly constructive
Comments
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This is great. Lots of emotion and a wonderful mental picture. Good luck and keep up the good work.
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This is very beautiful indeed. I loved the opening and closing stanzas the most. I loved the way you conveyed emotion through the writing to the picture.
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Most Beautiful Write
You got my vote on this one for sure. What a beautiful poem. Great imagery with beautiful romance with a sweet flow to it. I love the word you used Loverly. Absolutely a beautiful poem and you deserved the gold on this one. Thank you for sharing with me.
Kelle Marie
stavykm
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Wow, excellent job on this. A beautifully written poem you have here. Congratulations on winning gold. Definitely well deserved.
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Thank You Steve!
This was a creation of mine for one of the endless Contests here at AP. I guess I got inspired, and it has been well received. I'm glad you liked it. It was somewhat different for me--but I enjoyed the challenge.
Bless You,
David
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This is beautiful, The flow is perfect as well as the rhyme, such a lovely piece you have penned here. Congrats on the Gold trophy was well deserved
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Thanks for your kindness
Thanks Dear Lady for your kind remarks on this poem. It is justr one of those that once I began to write, it seemed to take on a life it's own. I am happy it was given the gold, but there were many other entries in that contest I felt just as and maybe even more so worthy of top honors. You just never know where or it a piece will land. I was blessed this time!
May you be oft' blessed as well,
David
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I absolutely love this wonderful lyric you have here Uncle Dave. You did an amazing job with this. Congratulations with winning the gold. It was certainly well-deserved.
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I see why this captured gold. I loved it. The rhyme was great and so is the vocabulary. I don't see the word conucopia much...loved the way you used it.
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This is truly a good work with good flow and melody throughout. Nicely done,
Evan
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hi this is an apt poetry ....u have done justice to it...great work
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Lovely serenade of love. Congratulations on winning the Gold trophy!
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This is a wonderful love song…while I was reading it; I heard its sweet hymn echoing to my ears and my heart melted because of its sincere and simple melody…thank you for sharing a very lovely tune…
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This writing is very good, my friend! It incites many connotations in me, which I beleive all poetry and songs are supposed to do. You've got an A+ in my book.
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I sing to you a Serenade,
With Springtime love in full parade
Love's passion shared while here we lay,
All in Love, this glorious day.
It seems all Nature's come along,
The birds enchant us with their songs,
And gazingly, eyes full of Love
Our souls sun-bathed from above.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Loverly, Lover lie,
Watch the world around us fly.
Lover Lie, Let's be as One--
'Till the setting of the Sun!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
In this Springtime Utopia,
Virtual Cornucopia
The fullness of Love's Blossomed rose,
We to each, their Love disclose.
So sing ye long, into the night,
As well we share full love's delight.
This special moment won't last long,
But Forever is Love's Song!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Lover lie, Loverly,
Oh you mean the world to me!
Loverly, Lover lie
With me 'till the day we die!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Okay now I know that this is very bad, but it doesnt make me even a little sad, I can not choose a favorite line, because the whole thing just seems to rhyme. And it is perfect on its own, no criticism seems to be owed, thank you ever so much for sharing, it is great and I am cheering!
Thank you for entering my contest, and best of luck to you as well!! -
This poem is really lovely. I love the clever rhyming and the pretty images of nature. Great job! :
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