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Another Day Begins

I wake you with soft kisses
as that damned alarm screams that it's 6 a.m.
and you have to leave the spot you've carved from my side
to go elsewhere without me.
But sweet embraces make our parting more bearable
while this early morning gauze
envelops the cold world looming just outside
of our private cocoon.

Sweet man how you have changed me.

The minutes tick away
while we struggle to break this trance
that holds us somewhere between restlessness
and the spell that sleep so often casts.
Know that each kiss will esculate
'til we find ourselves gasping for air
throwing any reminent of a schedule out the window
to indulge in each brilliant second of this moment.

Can't believe how much I already need you.

And when we finally part
the growing distance physically pains me
how emotion can render one senseless
I will never know.
But those desperate kisses
stolen from the morning while time slips away
keeps that contented smile on my face
althroughout the rest of this less memorable day.

Baby I hope you leave feeling the same.

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  • Miss Faith
    February 10, 2008
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    awwww!

    loved it!

  • Gothic belly dance
    November 21, 2007
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    very cute

    i think everyone wishes they could write down this feeling so easily and so lovely.


  • landmark
    November 7, 2007
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    ah! i love this! it reminds me of my relationship... beautifully done... lovely


  • ms tia1
    November 7, 2007
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    Sigh!

    Been there ...know the feeling ...love this piece.
    Thanks for sharing it !


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    November 7, 2007

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    this is well written and i could almost feel him leaving as i read your words. thank you very much for sharing this with me today. viyanna rosemarie


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    November 7, 2007
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    Excellent write I enjoyed reading it keep up the excellent work and good luck in your future writes

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