You watch me with those great green eyes
Showing no sign of surprise
That suddenly I’m behind you.
I know you like what you see,
But what I’m holding’s just for me
So stop batting it with your paws.
It’s not for you, whatever you think,
Please look away or give me a wink,
You’re scaring me with your staring.
Author notes
This was inspired by my cat, Mittens, who stares intently at me whenever I've got food.
A contest entry
- Poems About Pets by psychiatrists dream.
450 points, ended December 10, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
All comments appreciated, I've not been writing poems for very long, so please let me know what you think!
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awww a sweet and cute write about your cat. thanks for entering and good luck
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this shows the nature of cats, abd for some reason, its all my cat does! lol. lovely piece!
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very sweet
a lovely poem! you captured the greedy nature of cats perfectly! well done
ana
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cool, well done amelia! i like it and can imagine it!! nice words.. evaxx
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This was wonderful, I have two kittens and I know exactly how you feel
very well written
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