Scan through my verses,
censor them.
Remove all the sex I had,
take away all the crude passion.
Scratch away those horrible,
horrible words.
Yes, edit my love.
Make me sound sophisticated
and then
if I become a poet,
tell me.
All I'll say to you
is
Fuck you!!
A contest entry
- Wierd And Wacky And Bizzare by lesbian-in-love.
525 points, ended November 13, 2007, 9 entries
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Comments
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Oh umm wow. Fuck you huh? I did not expect that. As they say be prepared to expect the unexpected. Nicely done though. Liked the way it flowed. I love the lines:
Yes, edit my love.
Make me sound sophisticated
and then
if I become a poet,
Those lines were my favorite. Thanks for entering and good luck to you.
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