How can this be, what have you done to me??
The whole world has turned on me
You've thrown me behind these padded walls.
The door's locked, no way to leave
This can't be, how can freedom not be free.
How can this be??
You have me locked up inside this cold, white-padded prison cell
You've left me with nothing but my own misery.
I fight for my sanity and a way to be free,
From this tyranny, I've gained nothing but eternal grief.
What have you done to me??
I fight my fear, I won't shed this single tear.
I yell out for an answer, receiving nothing, but eternal silence.
I've started to run but,
I've reached the end of my shackles.
How can this be, what have you done to me??
I've lost my mind, but I haven't lost all hope,
Can this all be just a dream?? I question the darkness.
With seconds to live, I know I've found myself again
But I'm still trapped, I'll find my path out.
Before the Reaper can figure this out, I yell to the dark...
How can this be, why have you done this to me??
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hmmm very good, quite a uncheerful poem, but never the less, i thoroughly enjoyed it,interesting thoughts expressed here smashing write.
bravo my freind.
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Wow.
Just... wow.
Amazing!
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You spelled nite wrong....otherwise great poem.
Mylee -
i like it
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I really.... -really- like this one. So full of misery and pure energy. Excellent poem!
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oh wow
Okay,so this is amazing.I love it.You have such an amazing talent.Its like WHAM in your face,emotion and meaning.I think you have this amazing talent.
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ooo i love this one nice work you are great at wrting i love your poetry nice work
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I don't thin that your title fits the poem at all. It onlymakes sense beacause of the padded room. But i still think it was an awesome write. Maybe you should try to put phrase "How can this be, what have you done to me??" as the title but brake it down for the title
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