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Turn around; don't go back.

Did you go down the wrong path?
Was that bend just too tempting
To resist; you just had to pick on him again
You had the chance,
Just to leave
Just to forget.
But you didn’t.
You picked on him again.
He killed himself on March 3rd 2007
Because you had to pick on him
Just that one last time
Couldn’t you have picked the other path?

Author notes

...I am so a writer and not a poet.
I'm just doing these on the spurr of the moment. Sorry xD

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  • second-born
    November 10, 2007

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    This was very shocking to me…if this is based on a personal story I am very saddened to hear this tragic incident…I like the heart-wrenching emotions of your poem…and the ending shot directly to my heart…thank you for sharing your poem…