Hate you

I hate the way you talk

I hate the way you walk

I hate the way you care

I hate all the dares

I hate the way you speak

I hate the your so weak

I hate when your not listening

I hate the way your seeing

I hate the pain

You make me insane

I hate the way you shake

I hate the way you ache

I hate the way you stalk

I hate the way you balk

I hate it when you say

I hate it when it's obvious

I hate everything about what you do

But you know what?

I still love you

A contest entry

Fire and Ice by Salig Flicka. 455 points, ended July 27, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

By me, right now

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Salig Flicka
June 29, 2008

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I know this feeling so well. The hate that tears you up and eats you from inside, only hurts worse because in all reality you still love them. It's a terrible feeling. Great write and good luck in the contest!

God bless,
~Praise~
jacieluves 20you
March 5, 2008
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awww that is so very sad and very good writing i love every word on that poem
LRoth
November 7, 2007
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I Love it, i can totally relate to it