I feel my defenses beginning to crumble
In pieces my barriers begin to crack
Now I am beginning to stumble
While screams come up from within the black
Each time my unreality wants me to stumble
Her efforts are always pushed back.
A contest entry
- The Harrisham Rhyme Form by Harrisham Minhas.
600 points, ended November 17, 2007, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - increase the peace [or something along those lines] by Sofia Nadia.
1050 points, ended November 25, 2007, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
How does this make you feel?
Comments
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hmmm
i'm not quite sure if this really fits into the category of poems i was looking for in my contest. might want to read the rules a bit more carefully
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This is a powerful poem.
Well expressed.
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