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Kissed By Demons

Pretty little shades of pink and blue

Blotting out the shimmer of the evening hue

Dead and dying. The light spikes out cold

As a slice of night begins to take hold.

Have you ever seen your sun go out?

There I was a ‘skinny little bastard’ of a lout.

The one you all used to hold SO dear

Is now lurking in the shadows here.

Eyes ablaze with a mentally sick light

Shivering in what seemed to me to be a great height.

And as the sun begins to dip then fall

I find myself in a long great hall.

I see my past, all those long lost fears

Then you all turn about and all I see is leers

I’m falling in this big dusken world

My body tumbling as if I’d been hurled.

I feel as if I’m falling without wings

Down, down, down. The wind is singing

In my ears I can hear you calling

Yes, shut up you bitches, I know I’m falling.

I see the land shrink then rise

My mind screaming at me that ‘I must be high’

But even I know so much better

I didn’t even have time to rip up THIS damn near suicidal letter.

I hear the screams from the crowd

‘He’s falling!’ Yes I know, please stop screaming so loud

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  • punkbliss
    November 7, 2007
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    DANG

    this poem is really good i liked all of it.
    i wish i could write like that.