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"Hope"

When yesterday the Sun set
I saw a star
Straight above me
But quite far
I saw an' wished
It may shine more
An' the red star
Was in sparks tore
It twinkled
An' seemed so fresh
The others fainted
When comparisoned
Know why?
It was a star of Hope
Yeah! more bright than all
On the sky
It sparked
Full of Hope
I knew one thing though
It would never die
As Hope lives forever

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  • kamranAslam
    November 27, 2007
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    Great piece ..thats what i wanted to see from u?great poetry.and a nice idea too.