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Air Which I Cannot Live Without..

To live we all need love,
And I'm grateful to have that love,
The love that my soul demands,
And that is like my air which I cannot live without.

His presents soothes my soul,
And I can feel his touch virbate through my body,
In shocks and pulses that awakens my mind to him,
I know he is there before I have looked at him.

To find someone who does this to me,
That is what love is for me,
My personal alarm that arouses my whole body,
The shakes and shudders I get just at the thought of him.

Sometimes I just smile for no apparent reason,
And then I realise exactly why I'm grinning,
For he is someone that I always think about,
Like his image burnt into the back of my mind.

Someone who I care for with all my heart,
And love so much and dearly,
He is my soulmate and someone I will always cherish,
For love has laid claim to me and my feelings too.

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Written for a contest by misticmoonlite - the great romantic xx

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    November 9, 2007

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    to share your heart with someone and to trust them not to harm,wonderful poem for your love,thank you for entering our contest,good luck..
    MM


  • anaisnais
    November 9, 2007
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    Aaaagghh how romanticslly wondeful to feel and write in this manner! Well done!


  • penman gold member
    November 7, 2007
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    Excellent

    Very well done. So touching and romantic. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 7, 2007
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    Ahh the euphoria!

    That one feels when they are consumed with feelings of love! good job poet!

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