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my cat, the great white hunter

a great white hunter
on the prowl
his mighty roar
a gentle yowl
silently stalks
an unwary cricket
such a fine quarry
for a mighty beast!
he squats
then springs!
the cricket chirps
and leaps aside
the amazing hunter
crashes into the floor
a savage chase
quickly ensues
the prey leaps onto the wall
taking shelter
on a high bookcase
the cricket chirps
taunting the hunter
who leaps and jumps
but cannot reach
his tasty prey
yowling in defeat
he runs to his food bowl
to chow on IAMS instead

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    November 11, 2007

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    This is delightfully done. I was wondering what he was going to eat Dogs and cats are both great huh? I always had them growing up, I miss them. Great job here.

    • SageSilvertail
      November 12, 2007
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      Thank you very much, I'm really happy you liked my poem. Take care and have an awesome day!