Oh my love
I am a penniless man inefficient to prolong
the necessities of life
especially when I can't gift you even a ring
you make me to think that I am a well-to-do man
while you are unclad to make love with me
you figure like a priceless angel of this globe
which I can endure..
Oh my love
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt 10 entries/ 5 -10 lines by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended November 8, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I live with one beloved
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The heart speaks Volumes!!
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Beautiful imagery and such heartfelt love. Words to touch the heart... how wonderful love can be, more so when it is felt so strongly.
A piece to be admired.
Very romantic.
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A priceless angel of this globe which I can endure.
I like this line. Good luck in the contest.
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If this is based upon the picture given, it seems the 'voice' speaks of being the dying tree beneath the lovely angel, still able to endure for love of her. The love that gives him life. Beautiful images and lovely word arrangement. Good luck in the contest. Peace, Rhonda
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Mystic Beauty!
Very deep thoughts translated to a beautiful experience! Congrats, and best regards!
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Wow indeed this is heavy. well done my freind on the prompt. Awesome. best wishes to you in the contest.
Tory
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