Have seen your eyes gazing, with fading lips not to cry,
A lustrous naked body tightened to tremble with spasms of sorrows.
Having felt shivering in moment of sympathising,
a numbness of sensations impossible to draw.
Eyes opening to look sky's form,
with wings in a haste thinking to fly or not.
Faint aroma of dark whispers, saviour scabrous scalds,
listened groans, panting in under currents of fortitudes.
Separated world looks in thorn roots of insatiable wishes
with so much intensity.
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A contest entry
- Picture Prompt 10 entries/ 5 -10 lines by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended November 8, 2007, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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I love this. It is beauriful and so deeply moving. Sorrow felt in your words, so touching.
Great job!
Thank you for entering!
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