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Branches

Branches of anguish
hold dark beauty aloft
residing still on crystal
spun of her true fashion

Gentle arms extending
to reach fear's balcony
are met with reproach
of sincerity's branches  


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  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 8, 2007

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    Very expressive and beautifully written...soft sweet flow and lovely ending.
    Nice take on the picture.
    Strong ending of inspiration.

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  • PerfectImperfection
    November 8, 2007

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    I really like this. You have such a magnificent way with words and expression. Beautiful, truly...