"Well is seems to me..."
was cut off, before the
clowns had time to
send in the acrobats.
Major contradictions
aren't taken lightly
in a world this refined.
Maybe sometimes
wonderland isn't that far away,
&& rabbit holes hold more
ingenuity than any of your competitors
but holding hands is overrated
anyway.
Capital letters
fell feet from the tightrope
shaken stubbornly under the big top.
But then, good grammar isn't as good
as a good friend.
Author notes
Me and Friday met when she told me I didn't need to put capital letters on each line of my poem. I've been dedidcated ever since, she's brilliant and although I'm not writing alot at the moment, i had to enter this contest... if you need an explaination of the metaphors in this I'll be more than happy to explain... they're not coming out of my head very comprhensive lately.
In a list
A contest entry
- && Its Friday, Im In Love by AshliiAsphyxiation.
513 points, ended November 20, 2007, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Alice ♥ Carnivals ♥
I swear you've got me in a few lines here. And it's so true! We really did!
Of course I absolutely adore this! It makes me smile like the sunshine 
Thank you hun, it really means a lot that you'd take the time to write this
♥
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I agree with her... this is the best yet. I love it... it kinda feels like something she would write even. Awesome job. Good luck in the contest.
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Oh wow. I was waiting to get an entry with a helen related story behind it.
This is fantastic!
And i like the use of alice/circus themes.
This is the best yet!
the metaphores are brilliant babes, glad to see you writing again!
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