By the miracle of my first true steps,
with the spine you've given me,
made of a wax that can't be
chipped or melted,
I see the dark for what it is.
Running, I chase the night away,
and light the world with your name.
A contest entry
- Passion: 50 words or less by Lj-.
300 points, ended November 8, 2007, 8 entries
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this is really beautiful... loved it !
will check out more of your work.
nicely done,
~ wendy -
aWWWWWW interesting write
This write made me PURRR eventhough I am not a cat but it strokes me well..it really wow...it's lovely..it's sweet...it's like a butterfly...cute and nice..good and likeable ..yep I said it all ...this piece...i said it all...
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Nice poem.
Thank you for your entry,
Best of luck.
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Damn.
Just...damn. -
I chase the night away,
and light the world with your name
-Why is this the most bonkers thing you've ever said?
-C
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