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i.
Periwinkle thoughts
brush--
the silent edges
of my symphony.
ii.
"I breathe-
the gray shades
of your hue".
iii.
Love's intermittent
as flying.
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Author notes
Inspired by:
"the most beautiful thing in music is silence
as pause is in poetry"
Written November 7, 2007
A contest entry
- 22 words or less - 3 days by Namita.
300 points, ended November 8, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Perfect [almost]
The ending could be just one line longer to touch up the similiar wording and effects of itself. But beautifully choosen words and phrasing. Words extremely well together.
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I really like the serene and fleeting feeling of this one Kabayan. The second stanza appeals to me most. I just love its simplicity. To understand the different shades of love can be as easy as breathing, that is if we allow ourselves with such privilege. Thank you for sharing this here. Mabuhay ka kaibigan.
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Excellent.
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Great poem by great poet! Good luck in the contest!
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oh, my goodness.....this is gorgeous..
I love three - it's so true, and the imagery and emotion in this is beautiful Excellent poem
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