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Experiment With Colloquial Wimperings #1 (Some Personal, Some Plagiarised)

...only...one to offend...
...[a] power over me...
I don't wanna live...
I don't wanna live...
Why?

(((Something to hold on to,
Screams---Door crashings---
Schizophrenic---Dane Cook---
Cahshews---I digresssssss)))

...I can't explain...
...everything...
...just...so....
GAHHHHHHHH!

(that was not a wimper)

...mirror...
mirrror, reflect...
...so fucking...
...bitch...fuck...
shit... goddamn...

pillow.
cry.
blah.
breath.

Author notes

note to self: needs to be more concise---I don't think I captured the helplessness of the victim here, enough. I need more phrases, to, and to talk to someone in my head that needs to not listen to me. Or maybe someone that wants to help but the victim pushes away. Arguments, but the pushed one needs to be compassionate. Hm.

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