Look into my eyes
and past the fear of the bars, treating me so unmercifully as an animal,
then you'll see the truth I possess which reaches into your very soul,
now fall gently into my swaying arms of divine peaceful thoughts
where I'll heal the pains inside and show you love
in ways you have missed and crave so deeply for so long.
All the stories you've heard are lies, I know you feel it deeply as I speak,
as my heart purity flows in such sacred respect for all life,,
now free me from this undue torment and we shall feast in heaven,
I shall bring the fauve beans.
A contest entry
- Hey! Let Me OUT!!! Quicky Contest - Come in and see! by intanglio2ring.
450 points, ended November 7, 2007, 2 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give Me Your Best...Quickie :) by Heavenly Angel.
475 points, ended November 12, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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MOST EXCELLENT!
You've done extremely well with this one!
Thank you so much for sharing and for being a part of the contest! -
Ehhh can feel his eyes piercing through my soul with this congrats on the gold and much luck in the contest
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
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Oh My!!
One of my favorite movies that raises the blood pressure
Congratulations on Your Trophy Sweetness
Love how You weaved these words together
Magnificent!!
Thank goodness I don't eat meat
Oh Wait...I meant...
Thank goodness he and I would never meet...
Wooooooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Keep that quill dancing
Best wishes to You in all You do
Many blessings to You
and my Love
~ Desire~*~
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Thank you darling for the touching encouragement. You're sweetness so blessed all the time.
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con artist or spiritual being?
I asked myself. But then I got to the final line and was left with the shivers. (Tho' I think it's spelt "fava" beans.)
Congratulations on your gold. This is a really good write.
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Thanks for the comment, but when I checked the dictionary it showed it to be Fauve. So I went with how they spelled it.
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lol i would be running for the hills lol
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Thank you for the wonderful comment
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Oooo Fauve Beans!
Don't quite know if I can trust you - a smooth talker you are for sure though!
Thanks for a great entry & Good Luck!
Tang
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