Don’t wanna let you see them cry
Hiding alone in this cruel dark world
Don’t wanna hurt all over again
Don’t wanna lose you one more time
Our moments they lasted forever,
And those memories will pull them together.
For all the souls that are screaming.
Trying to hard to break through,
The ice cold surface of their broken hearts.
Wonder what will tear them free.
Shattered beyond belief
By tragedies haunting their past
Can’t let you in anymore
Least you heal a shattered heart
Our moments they lasted forever,
And these memories will pull them together.
Hold them close and let them in
To a world that only you can share.
Don’t let them run away,
Catch their tears and never let them go.
For all the souls that are screaming.
Trying so hard to break through,
The ice cold surface of their broken hearts.
Wonder when they’ll let themselves free.
Our moments they lasted forever,
And these memories will pull them together.
For all the souls that are screaming.
They tried so hard to break through,
The frozen surfaces of their broken hearts.
Wonder who’ll break them free.
Our moments they lasted forever,
And these memories will pull them together.
Author notes
So I tried to write some lyrics.. horrible of me i know... but ohh well.. this is another piece for my Finding Neverland assignment in English... can you tell im trying to get a good mark there?
Please tell me what you think
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it is simply amazing at what an assignment does to you sis as you prodice some interesting poetry like this one. any ways this is a very well written well penned poem and I love the depth to this poem. any ways what really impresses me most was how this is almost as I agree with below a lyrical style poem and wlel if you get the right singers to do this and structure it a bit more it can becomequiter a good song. anyw ays other than that I just really like this alot. keep up the good work.
Bro
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Wow this is just amazing! Such powerful lyrics here and so very sad at the same time!
I am sure you'll get an amazing mark for this!
Gaylene


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this could be a really cool song hunni
you'll have to sing it to me some time
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hmmmm... there not horrible lyrics at all! in fact if you put some verses together it could make a wonderful song! i know this because i'm in a band, and you've got excellent writing here!


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