Break free,
Leave life.
Escape the body you are
Held captive inside.
Run wild
There are no restraints
Be at peace, leave the
Poison far, far away.
Hold on tight
To all that’s
Left.
Don’t cry over
My Body.
When at last
I can’t feel
Anything anymore.
Spirits wander
Where no darkness dwells
Finally I have found my
Heaven.
Author notes
Again this is another Finding Neverland poem... when Peter grows up he commits suicide and so this is sort of what this poem is about... him. but me also.
Claire-Anne
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Nice Work :)
I found myself reading this poem a few times more and more and slowing how fast I read poem and well its slowly grows on you as you start to grasp the concept and the angle of the poem you were going for here. any ways this is a very well written poem and I liked it. you really have good flow and structure to your poem and it really makes this a winner. good work and kepe it up
Bro
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A++++
Good like the word usage it flows together really well keep it up
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beautiful as always sad but beautiful
i luffles you darling -
wow! this is really well written! and a very poetic way to describe the concept you came up with! great job! i luffles you!
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