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Puppy Love

she's the girl with the chocolate brown hair
she seems to be crude and with out too much care.
but i dare conclude;
despite her painted mood,
that she is much more than meets the eye.
she is sweet, humble, and rather quite shy.
how do i know such things you may ask..
well her true love.. i did unmask.
i sat in my lab and searched and i did look
and what i unearthed was this little ladies hook.
all it takes to make her coo, love, and laugh
is a little pooch or two, one small, one a giraffe.
dufus and luna just so happen to be their names;
they'll turn her into a child no matter what she claims.
she may spout sarcastic things and scowl,
but all it takes is one little howl,
to put her on her knees, face in awe
at the giant dog and the little pattered paws.




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to cherise.

i wrote this quick.
is it to your liking?
i can make another..
it was actually fun.

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  • L000
    November 6, 2007

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    Aww I can't believe you really wrote me one ! I didn't think you would . That means a lot to me ! Im not sure why - I think it just makes me feel like someone listens to me haha . Of course it was fun ! Your babies are fun !!! Yes I want another - but if you are busy this one will suffice . dufus and luna just so happen to be their names;
    they'll turn her into a child no matter what she claims. pfff how am I child like ?! I hope your book is still coming along - tell me about it when you get a chance and I look forward to another poem !