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your universe

There is an orbit around you
And I find myself circling round
Dizzier and dizzier with every spin
Never wondering what season I’m in
But I always feel the same warmth
Distancing at times
In the grander winter months
Or scorching me throughout
Your nasty little summers
But always a reminder
Of never
not ever
being your sun

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  • insearchofsweetness
    May 1, 2008

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    Whoa, what a great analogy for a love unreturned. Every emotion you posed in this poem I can relate to and just don't know how to pen. Love it!