I love you like crazy,
And won't ever stop.
Although we're young,
That doesn't stop me.
We're waiting two more years,
And that is far too long.
For I want to be with you now,
And stay with you forever.
You have found the key to my heart,
And used it.
You unlocked my heart,
When I least expected it.
Help me find your key,
So I can unlock yours.
For I want to spend forever with you,
Because I love you eternally.
Take me and hold me,
Never let go.
You love me,
Don't deny it.
You have taken the key to my heart,
And used it.
But my heart is broken,
Because you let it go.
I want you to promise,
That you'll take me in your arms,
Never let go.
For you have unlocked my heart.
Author notes
Amazingly, it's been about 11 months since daniel and i have been apart. and i still love him to death. i would do almost anything to be with him forever, as you may be able to tell by my other poems. It is also weird because the day he said i love you i had just figured out that i loved him. so it was quite unexpected indeed. I didn't expect him to unlock my heart like he did. Unexpected love. well, i hope you enjoyed it! Option #3
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love is love, no matter what.
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WOW this is exactly what i wanted! Thank you so much I needed this and I know how this feels thanks for entering and good luck.
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I like this, I like the way you use the 'key to my heart' metaphor in this. I can also really feel your emotions and the pain of being in love too young. Thank you for your entry and good luck, Hannu xx
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awww, how sad
that sux, wat happend, but the poems great, thanx for entering -
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well it's a long story but i'll make it short and simple. when we were 13, about a year ago, we fell in love. a week after he said those three little words with big meaning, it ended because we aren't 16 and have to wait until then - it's just our standards. it really really really stinks if you can't already tell.
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wow! you did really fall for him.... the poem has really touched my heart, trusting your emotions believing in the other, thank you for the entry,and good luck...MM
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