Love is like a rock,
Strong,
Constant,
A testament to time.
When refined and cared for,
It can be a precious gem.
And just like a rock,
Love can be thrown back at you.
And so just like a rock,
Love can be a real pain.
Author notes
Love does rock
but it can be a real pain
A contest entry
- ~Love Rocks... by Nature Song.
575 points, ended November 17, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very true" nice one ...!!
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LOVE THIS PIECE...I have felt this pain many times. And it does hurt. Love can be beautiful with the right person and a living heel if it's not. Great piece..
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Liked the similie you used in this poem. Liked th flow and the brevity of the lines - there certainly is a likeness between these two objects.
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Yes very very truthful I liked this nice dry humor
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And just like a rock it can make you trip and fall.
Sorry, just had to add that. Anyhow as always this poem written by you was quite good, and I loved it. I think that you have wonderful talent. And hey sometimes we must jump over that rock OR ( the best one) ask Jesus to move that rock because remember HE IS REAL LOVE.
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Love can be real pain, especially when thrown back at you! Wonderful words! Good luck in my contest ~Sie
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thats not just beautiful thats frikin hillarious...but so true...great write my friend, short and to the point.
keep writing.
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this is beautiful almost a wedding vow. I love it! Good luck in the contest! ^_^
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This gives a giggle or two,,
it's knowing when to duck is the art.
nice take tho..
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