Soft and gentle loving as we lay upon her bed
I am still within her body placing kisses on her head
My fingers have her nipples and they hold them not too tight
And we're going to be loving for the next eight hours of night
First inside her pussy I will leave a dose of cum
Then she's sure to ask me for another in her bum
A sixty-nine at some point I would say is on the card
The only problem that I see - eight hours of staying hard!
Slow and steady loving, we have hours of night to fill
So well spend some time just cuddling and laying very still
Her hand will cup my bollocks and my hands will hold her cheeks
And it maybe many moments before either of us speaks
Doggy style and hard and fast, is what we're up to now
Just now she was a cowgirl, I was mooing like the cow!
The Kama Sutra's many pages we will try to try them all
The time we've marked for sleeping is so very very small!
Holding gently arm in arm, looking in each other's eyes
Resting in between the bouts of erotic exercise
Still we're staying coupled as to do so seems so right
We're hoping we can stay that way for many hours tonight
In the morning we'll have loved, and played the whole night through
There won't be many ways we haven't done our best to screw
We'll be very very tired and we may be rather sore
But one thing you can bet is we'll be ready for some more!
Author notes
The fifth stanza was omitted straight after I wrote it to make the poem short enough for a contest, it is now as I intended it to be.
A contest entry
- Everything Erotica! by Lost-Rose-Petal.
360 points, ended November 22, 2007, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - HUGE POINTS Our Love Lifes ADULT 18+ by WillAlwaysLove.
1800 points, ended November 19, 2007, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - [tighten the handcuffs]&{ z o o m } by PaiigeBARBIE.
460 points, ended November 18, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please comment below. Spelling or rhyming or scanning corrections welcome.
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omg omg omg omg!!!
ok, i love this.
i cant even...
gahh ur so a finalist!!!
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Great rhymes! Really good imagery - but the thought of 8 hours made me sore just thinking about it! Really sexy and hot!
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someone it seems...
...had a great time! Which I also enjoyed by living the scene in my mind! so all there is left to say is:
can someone get me a cigarette? l.o.l.! a very enjoyable read!
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Ah! The good old days! I am single now and although your prose is as hot as it comes, I found myself feeling tortured by my temporary (I HOPE!) lack of male companionship! Oh well I guess the Duracell Company will be pleased by my situation when what I NEED is the Energizer Bunny! (metaphorically speaking!) ha! ha! Good luck in the contest...
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Awesome erotica, I loved the poem. Your rhyming was perfect and your words jumped out of the page. You got my juices flowing and that is what I wanted! Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
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When painting dearest poet your picture is divine
I wish all nights of passion were like yours and not like mine
Though little sleep I'm sure would not be had by you that night
No matter, when I close my eyes, before me what a sight!
Although you say an audience would be quite welcome here
On such a night of love it would be wrong to watch, I fear
Thanks, I'm glad you shared your night of passion with us all
I'll creep back to my room, just on the left there, down the hall.
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Now that I know where you will be
I'll try to sneak away
The poem only filled the night
I could let you have the day
If I keep getting popular
I'll have to think anew
If he is wanted night and day
What can a poet do?
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YOWZA!!! This was just crazy insane HOT!!! Good luck in the contest... I am off for the cold shower..LOL
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great write
good luck in the contest -
Wonderful job here Jeff once again you left me feeling like i walked into someones private escapade sheesh.
well done, best wishes in the contest.
Tory
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This was to be the fifth stanza but only 20 lines were asked for.
Holding gently arm in arm, looking in each other's eyes
Resting in between the bouts of erotic exercise
Still we're staying coupled as to do so seems so right
We're hoping we can stay that way for many hours tonight
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add them in your author notes dear. (the stanzas)
so it tillbe part of the poem when someone reads it.
Definately a worthy read and glad i stoppped in. but now i feel like an intruder, so on the road again.
Good luck to you'
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If I'm going to perform for eight hours an audience may be very welcome!
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