My fallen faith required a friend
And you extended…you
Can I help it you appeared
As an angel in abysmal night
Your aspect like the sun
To a hole prisoner’s morning eyes…
Just that beautiful
Please tell me what you think
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superb
Marvellous imagery here. I could feel the gnawing sense of lack at the core that we feel with ourselves, and the longing to be with someone whom we need to complement our self. Congrast for penning this wonderful poem, friend
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A very in depth piece of thought. Endearing observation of the beauty beheld. Nicely penned!
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this is short
but says so much to me
a beautiful write my friend.
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thank you
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Very soothing,quite gorgeous...
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Interesting metaphor. Cool.
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Just a note to say your author page is lovely - beautiful picture. Liked the thoughts in this poem - not sure about hole - do you mean whole there? Don't quite understand it.
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I have someone like that too. Keep her and keep writing, you make yourself heard beautifully.
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vry beautiful pome loved the rhyme and the flow you are an amazing poet
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"Can I help it you appeared
As an angel in abysmal night"
What a wonderful image is written in these words, and stunning alliteration!
True friendship outweighs almost everything. When there is someone in your corner who can be trusted, without question, you have the best life can offer. Love the last three lines.
"like the sun
To a hole prisoner’s morning eyes…"
Very clever wording. So much said here with so few words. Excellent!
Much Love Always ♥
Ma
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Wow, this is really deep. I got a very spiritual feelin when I read this. It's simple, yet very thought provoking and touching. Great write. Check me out sometime. - cgirl0410
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Oh thank you so much for this poem. I love reading your work. This is beautiful and I know about true friends. Well done!
Love,
Amera♥
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lovely words of the light a friend can shed in the hopeless abyss of darkness.
The impact the 4 a's provide add complexity in the middle sandwiched with simple lines. I know you did that in the first line which was a nice intro.
I was going to quote my favorite line, but I think it might be all of them...I especially like
Your aspect like the sun
To a hole prisoner’s morning eyes…
great poem, there is much in these few lines
blessings,
Michelle
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This is so beautiful, very nice indeed. I like the title 'hand held' I never expected the poem that came with it, which is even more ingenious on your part.
Well done my friend,
Lil
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