I need to hear your voice
To sooth my shattered soul
I need to feel your love
To wrap myself into
I need to be in your presence
To reassure myself that
I'm still alive
No class goes by
Where I dont write your name
No hour goes by
When I dont think about you
No moment goes by
That I'm not singing our song
Nothing can quantify
My love for you
Nothing can replace
What you are to me
You are the light
That shines through
My dark world
You are the reason
Why I still endure
Through this life
You will always
Be my everything
Because I love you
With my whole heart
And I will love you
Forever
Author notes
TR
A contest entry
- Romantic Hearts (Show Your Emotions) ( Contest ) by misticmoonlite.
650 points, ended November 9, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - WINNER TAKE ALL!!!! ONE THOUSAND POINTS (well sort of) by DrunkenRam.
1019 points, ended November 16, 2007, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - What 's the point? by black hearted rebel.
450 points, ended November 18, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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smoothly and passionately written, the love just oozes from this poem. Nice flow, best of luck...Scott
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Guilty
I apologize for taking so long to comment on you poem
I thought this was a powerful piece, truly heartfelt, the rhythm was good and you stayed on subject, it was one of the finalists.
I hope to see you in future contests of mine.
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Great
This was a wonderful piece!!thanks for entering!!good luck in the contest! -
Guilty ( Everybody"s Guilty)
Thanks for entering my contest< I will be commenting when it is over. Good Luck! -
ah this is a promise of a love forever treasured, awesome small poem to show how you feel..thank you for the entrey and good luck..mm
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