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Tell Me

I know I wasn't always the best,
I know I hurt you and that I regret.
I know that now your seeing someone new,
but I can't seem to let go of you.
It's been a long time, I finally found myself,
as it turns out your still always there.
I just need to know one thing now,
are you over me, cause I can't figure it out.


If you love her, why do I still feel you there,
Hand out stretched and not gone off somewhere.
If you love her, why do I still see your glance,
Then look away when I look back.
If you love her then why can’t I feel,
That were over and never going back.
If you love her the way that you loved me,
Then come out and tell me your over me.
Tell me that you don’t love me.


It just seems to me you still see me there,
in your life and never very far away.
When I walk into a room I feel the heat,
even though you try to turn away from me.
You still shudder when I call your name,
so how do you expect me to think.
I don't know why we still play these games,
unless you are really over me.


If you love her, why do I still feel you there,
Hand out stretched and not gone off somewhere.
If you love her, why do I still see your glance,
Then look away when I look back.
If you love her then why can’t I feel,
That were over and never going back.
If you love her the way that you loved me,
Then come out and tell me your over me.
Tell me that you don’t love me.

Tell me that you don't love me.
Even if you don't mean it.
If you love her, just let me go,
I need to know.
I need to know....
Just tell me , even if you don't mean it,
tell me that you don't love me.


If you love her, why do I still feel you there,
Hand out stretched and not gone off somewhere.
If you love her, why do I still see your glance,
Then look away when I look back.
If you love her then why can’t I feel,
That were over and never going back.
If you love her the way that you loved me,
Then come out and tell me your over me.
Tell me that you don’t love me.
Tell me that you don't love me.

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This is a song I wrote for this contest. hope you like it

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  • Sinnastarr silver member
    May 6, 2008

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    These are really good lyrics. I always said you were a really good lyricist. Can't wait to hear this song!


  • NurseChilly gold member
    November 9, 2007

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    thanks so much for entering this contest.. glad that it inspired you to write... beautiful

    thanks

    G.x


  • Sinnastarr silver member
    November 9, 2007
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    This was great! I loved every word. This poem just grabs the readers heart and won't let go. I know you will do well in the contest you are in.
    Once again you have impressed me.
    Well done. Keep up the good work.


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    November 6, 2007
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    So sad. So telling of beauty at the same time.