You are the reason
I get up in the morning...
Your soft golden, flowing hair
like sunlit sparkles in the air
Those whimsical, sweet eyes
of ocean blue...
All the seeking and loving
ways about you
The cuddly, warm pajamas
that you wear
Little endearing things
that show you care
That first cup of morning
tea between us...
The smiles, the glances
All the love and the fuss
You are the sunshine
that starts my day
...the reason that
I feel this way...
A change in season
Lulling tunes you sing
For you are the reason
I get up in the morning
A contest entry
- Early in the Morning by Utok Bulinaw.
450 points, ended November 16, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very beautiful. I think this would make a great little song to sing.
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-Thanks hon! It's simple and airy - but close to my heart.
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this is fine but I better have my coffee great write my dear
love the rev papa
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Lovely Karen, just like you. Please do not change you have grace, style and class in your writing.I wish more would see they do not need the crude words you write so well.
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This is a peaceful poem.
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This is sweet. But honestly, this is not what I am looking for. The language is just clichéd. To write love poems is a little bit difficult especially when you try to avoid overused phrases. But one can write such poems without being mushy. I suggest reading the works of poets here like Nicolette. Nonetheless, thank you for entering.
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