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Ceremony of Tears

Holding a teacup
At dawn sunrise meditation,
I give thanks
For the souls
That I love,
Friendships past and present.

And at sunset,
There will be
A ceremony of tears
For fragile people
I hurt
When my heart
Only intended kindness.

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  • ea silver member
    November 7, 2007
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    This is a beautiful, compassionate piece, Uriah, and very fitting for the theme of this contest.