My heart has been ripped out again
Ripped into little pieces.
I just don't get it
i don't understand
how this on and off
love cycle can affect me so much.
I've had chances
but have never taken them.
I know i should be with you.
but whether or not you feel the same is a different story.
I thought you loved me again
but apparently not
apparently you have fallen
for some other girl.
Probably one that is prettier or smarter than me.
I wish that we could be together.
but we were both to stupid to ever take a chance.
I know we are best friends
but we both know that in some way
a relationship would have worked.
These feelings are like a roller coaster.
but we are always in two separate cars.
Never colliding into one
to be together.
why i don't know
because we'd be perfect.
well, as close to perfect as we could be.
I don't know why this hurt me so,
finding out that you like someone else.
I got my hopes up
and then they were shot down.
like a bullet to a bird.
But there isn't anything i can do.
but i just cannot accept the truth
that possibly we've missed our chances,
and now we are both going to have to move on.
I don't know if I can,
but if i must, i guess i have to try.
Author notes
Title: P.S. I Love You
First Off- I hope this works for your contest. i was just kinda feeling it. Its kinda a more hurtful type of love, well hurting. i guess. but i thouhgt it still might work. if not, im sorry
Second- I know i havent writtien a lot fo poetry in a while, so this might be a bit rusty
Third- I do actually feel this way, about someone. and its been us both off and on liking eachother, yet we are best friends, so we have never actually done anything to start a relationship. which sometimes sucks. he told me yesterday, that he liked a girl sitting to the left of him at his lunch table but he didnt want to risk a friendship. i thought that girl was me. but apparently i was wrong. so it probably wasnt his left. but i was todl that one of my friends found out who he likes, and it wasnt me. i felt my heart beign ripped out. and stomped on. i dont even know why, cuase i thought i didnt like him. but i guess that hope that he might like me again, made me think, omg is this the time, where its actually goign to work. and to find out, that its not, hurt, it hurt like hell.
A contest entry
- I Could Never Be The One You Want by tigress3737.
600 points, ended November 17, 2007, 42 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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*sigh* Sorry, maybe I shouldn't have told you. But you would've found out sooner or later. :/
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what makes you think its about him.
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I could definetly see the hurt in this poem but it seems a bit unoriginal and cliche. Thank you for entering in my contest
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*sighs* yeah i understand. itsjust kind of how i was feeling today.thanks for the comment
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