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Fiyero

Moving, gently, moving to caress you
Finally, here now, I say that I love you
Come with me now, just for this moment
I will, stay here, time will not end it

I slowly miss you, as you are gone away now
The green queen of my heart I will not bow
Tears fall down my cheeks here, are you here?
My fury is growing, why aren't you near?

"Gather the people here to me"
"Let them all come to see"
"One star coming to crash upon the shore"
"This one star will be the first of many more"

The armies march under my command
I will sweep these munchkins from the land
Are you here now? Do you hear me too?
I will kill, until I do not miss you

The cries grow fainter now, in this place
At the final extermination of a race
In this place called Oz, you see
Where once there was four, now is three

The munchkins gone, next is the Emerald City
Green with red what do get, don't know, pity
The city will fall, no more green
To remind of what you could have been.

The wind grows softer for me today
This world is gone and none left to slay
My loneliness is still unabated
I wish to die, but still created

There is no one left for my rage
I locked the door on my own cage
There is no one left with the power
To kill me in this final green-blue tower.

Author notes

Book, i did make it stretch a little bit, but that is what i would do if I was that poor guy.

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  • Luthien Luinwe
    November 6, 2007
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    Interesting twist. A very powerful and emotional write. Poor Fiyero. Thanks for entering!