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Our Love

Missing image
Love's passion, reflected by pale moonlight,
glistens in tender eyes and I smile
as I peer into your gentle face's glow
and reassurance is the unspoken.

Harvesting emotions, I look inward,
finding peace's serenity has roomed
and sublimity's gift has been opened
as we have come to know each other's heart.

Dawn will come in the morning we embrace
and treasured will be the passion we shared.
Ecstasy knows no fulfillment as ours
since our soul's we truly meant to be.

Entwined in the tango that we two share,
there's no jealousy in security
and comfort knows no bounds through the long night.
Your arms have held me from the beginning

as our love has increased throughout all time.
Tonight, we speak vows before God and man,
to live united and walk together,
united, inseparable and as one.

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    November 9, 2007

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    Reflections of your love is one of a kind romance, life is as you let it and love that makes you shine in the worst of days, you penned this well. as said before me lovely pic with your poem,says a lot, thank you for your entry and good luck...MM


  • grannyeri gold member
    November 6, 2007

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    What a lovely picture chosen for this poem - liked the flow of the piece and the sntiments expressed so well in these lines. Wishing you well in this contest,