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I want to leave

To be gone would be nice
To leave this place of ice.
Why are we here?
I did have an answer
But now its like cancer.
I hate to say
But I am here to stay.
Whether I want to
But do not.
I want to get out
So I'm not under this pressure
That I can't measure.
So please let me go
Just don't forget me.
I have no place
In this ice race.
so why not leave now?
We're all going to die
Its not like we can run away and fly.
So I ask again
Can I
Just leave in a blink of an eye?

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  • iamthebeatles
    November 7, 2007
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    this is so sad! so full of emotion

    good poem, but ouch!
    *peace*