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Reflection




edge of conviction
eroded like beach glass

once clear, now opaque

I touch my reflection
to see if I'm real

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Picture Prompt, 20 words or less

A contest entry

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Comments

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  • Swan song gold member
    November 9, 2007

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    This is a poem to make you think esp after drining some good whiskey. I am sober and it blew my mind


  • Peteskid gold member
    November 7, 2007
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    so very creative, imaginative...PK


  • HaleyMary
    November 6, 2007

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    Beautiful write. Wonderful take on the prompt. I liked the last two lines the best. It made me think of questioning if love is real or if it's all in people's minds. Keep up the great work.


  • delightfulmess silver member
    November 6, 2007

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    oh Oh OH!!!!! this take.
    Wonderfully done. Best of luck in the contest


    Delila


  • PerVirtuous
    November 6, 2007
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    You are real alright!


  • Cup-a-Joe
    November 6, 2007
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    Moon Child

    Well I don't have a chanch of winning now..(LOL)
    This is great.
    Joe

  • Suzanne Dia
    November 6, 2007

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    Nice one again. You're good with brevity and creating really concise images. Thanks again for entering, good luck to you.

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