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Pain

It hurts.
It hurts to be forced to choose.
It hurts to be told that you can’t live two lives.
It hurts to be forced to live in one world or the other.
It hurts to remember.
It hurts to remember the pain and desperation.
It hurts to remember the loss and the misery.
It even hurts to remember the joy.
Do you know what hurts worse than remembering?
Forgetting.

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I know,
It makes almost no scence what so ever.

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  • DanicaH
    November 8, 2007

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    INTENSE! This is my fav one, although i think remembering is more painful sometimes, but i get the forgetting part to.


    • water-spirit-ryuu
      March 5, 2008
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      Yeah, I stand by my forgetting is more painful, but I get where you're comming from with the whole remembering thing.
      Glad you liked it!
      ^_^