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Harry Potter's 12 Days of Christmas

On the first day of Christmas
I had just received
a wand to fight YouKnowWho

On the second day of Christmas
Hermonie gave to me
two spells for potions
and a wand to fight YouKnowWho

On the third day of Christmas
Ron gave to me
three chocolate frog cards
two spells for potions
and a wand to fight YouKnowWho

On the fourth day of Christmas
Fred and George gave to me
four Dr. Filibuster's Fabulous Wet-Start fireworks
three chocolate frog cards
two spells for potions
and a wand to fight YouKnowWho

On the fifth day of Christmas
Snape gave to me
five points taken from Gryffindor
four wet-start fireworks
three chocolate frog cards
two spells for potions
and a wand to fight YouKnowWho

On the sixth day of Christmas
Hagrid gave to me
six dragon eggs
five points from Gryffindor
four wet-start fireworks
three chocolate frog cards
two spells for potions
and a wand to fight YouKnowWho

On the seventh day of Christmas
McGonagall gave to me
seven transfiguration spells
six dragon eggs
five points from Gryffindor
four wet-start fireworks
three chocolate frog cards
two spells for potions
and a wand to fight YouKnowWho

On the eighth day of Christmas
Sirius gave to me
eight invisibility cloaks
seven transfiguration spells
six dragon eggs
five points from Gryffindor
four wet-start firewords
three chocolate frog cards
two spells for potions
and a wand to fight YouKnowWho

On the ninth day of Christmas
Dumbledore gave to me
nine fiery phoenixes
eight invisibility cloaks
seven transfiguration spells
six dragon eggs
five points from Gryffindor
four wet-start fireworks
three chocolate frog cards
two spells for potions
and a wand to fight YouKnowWho

On the tenth day of Christmas
Cho Chang gave to me
ten little kisses
nine fiery phoenixes
eight invisibility cloaks
seven transfiguration spells
six dragon eggs
five points from Gryffindor
four wet-start fireworks
three chocolate frog cards
two spells for potions
and a wand to fight YouKnowWho

On the eleventh day of Christmas
Mrs. Weasley gave to me
eleven hand-made sweaters
ten little kisses
nine fiery phoenixes
eight invisibility cloaks
seven transfiguration spells
six dragon eggs
five points from Gryffindor
four wet-start fireworks
three chocolate frog cards
two spells for potions
and a wand to fight YouKnowWho

On the twelfth day of Christmas
Oliver Woods gave to me
twelve games of Quidditch won
eleven hand-made sweaters
ten little kisses
nine fiery phoenixes
eight invisibility cloaks
seven transfiguration spells
six dragon eggs
five points from Gryffindor
four wet-start fireworks
three chocolate frog cards
two spells for potions
and a wand to fight YouKnowWho

Merry Christmas!!!

Author notes

Well....I don't know if this is what you want but here you go! I had fun writing it

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  • Vera Rich gold member
    March 1, 2008
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    A neat idea... Unfortunately,the green background makes it very difficult for me to read!


  • montiebatmom
    January 3, 2008

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    TOO CUTE!!

    My son and I just read this and he is only confused about one thing. Sirrus cannot take points from Gryffendor. Apparently my spelling aside, we have a budding logistics critic in our midst. We thoroughly enjoyed this piece, and hope you (and Mr Potter) had a very Merry Christmas (minus YouKnowWho).


  • leander Moderators member
    December 3, 2007

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    When I saw this poem, I was thinking: holy - lol, that's quite a long one
    Anyway, I started reading it and noticed immediately the title is actually a well deserved one for this piece. And since I haven't read any Harry Potter book (or seen any movie either) I think I know maybe a little something more about it with this =d

    Anyway, I kinda lost interest here and there to be honest, but I managed to go through it and can still say to you it's a pretty good piece you've written

    Leander


  • macandrew
    November 27, 2007

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    Being non-magical in nature day ten was my favorite.

    A fun read.
    John


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    November 22, 2007

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    Not too familiar with Harry Potter but,
    I love how you wrote this piece. Great
    work and good luck to you with this one!




    Jeremy0826


  • Marshall013004
    November 22, 2007

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    i'm a harry potter fan so i enjoyed your poem very much !!! good luck in the contest and p btw shouldn't ron's sister being giving the kiss sinces that's whom he married. lol


  • Elvenfairy
    November 21, 2007
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    this was cute I guess. It would have been a LOT better if you had actually made it so it would match the song in sylables so you could sing it in your head as you read it. It would have been much more funny. Anyways, thanks for entering my contest. Merry Christmas and good luck!


  • February Moon gold member
    November 19, 2007

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    I really enjoyed this, but Gryffindor must have lost A LOT of points by the end of the song. Thank you for entering.
    Chelsea


  • PureRomance
    November 19, 2007

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    I love this poem. It's so adorable. Based on Harry Potter. I love it. Awesome job with this, good luck to you and your poem in the contests Keep up the excellent work.


  • daviscth silver member
    November 17, 2007
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    LOL. Thanks for posting and good luck. Cathy


  • harajukuprincess
    November 15, 2007

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    I love it! Its nice and innocent and still very very funny! Plus, I *heart* harry potter so that always helps! Thanks so much for the entry! ~~Hara


  • Cherokee
    November 14, 2007
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  • DrunkenRam
    November 13, 2007
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    Guilty ( Everybody"s Guilty)

    Thanks for entering my contest< I will be commenting when it is over. Good Luck!


  • takemypainaway
    November 13, 2007
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    very cute i like it!!

  • kitkat92
    November 12, 2007

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    hahahahahahahahaha

    I LOVE IT!!! harry potter, christmas, i absoloutly love it, i cant beleive u were actually able to think of all the things, its great, merry christmas, and thanx for entering lol


  • My Selfish Romance
    November 12, 2007
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    Ha! I really like this, well done. I always wanted a pheonix . Thankyou for entering my contest.

  • ms. kitty kat
    November 10, 2007

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    Great

    I love this a lot. I like Harry Potter, and I think that this was really creative. good luck in the contest.

    Kat


  • penman gold member
    November 9, 2007
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    Excellent

    Oh my this was truly clever. Fun of wonderful creativity. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Errant Panther gold member
    November 9, 2007

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    well done very clever, I was half expecting at the end for Professor Sprout to have given Harry 12 screaming Mandrakes. thanks for sharing something refreshingly fun.


  • Griswold silver member
    November 8, 2007

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    LOL, Excellently written, this flows very nicely from start to finish. very funny. This is wonderfully done indeed. Best of luck...Scott


  • bananasfoster42
    November 7, 2007
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    lol. nice. thanks for the entry!

  • daviscth silver member
    November 7, 2007

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    I enjoyed this very much and I loved how you referred to"He who shall not be named". LOL. Best of luck in this contest,Cathy


  • neoladyem
    November 6, 2007
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    This is funny and really cutie! I like how you keep to the theme and ever gift given is beleveable. Like with Mrs. Weasly and 11 sweaters. So you also keep to the whole charaters' personality. My favorite gift was the wand to be LORD VOLDMORT! Yes I dare say his name!

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