So many days we've spent alone without each other, wishing for that
One day when we could be with each other whenever we wanted. That day for
Us has come, full blast and we have never been so happy.
Leaving the negative things behind forever. I know we are
Meant to spend the rest of our lives in each others
Arms. One day making a creature or two of our love so pure and
True. Embracing the good times and learning from the bad. Growing old with
Each other and seeing our family grow in front of our eyes.
So much to look forward to, so much to see and do. I LOVE YOU
Thomas, with all my heart and I'll shout it to the world. I
Love you Thomas, until my soul leaves this earth, and then I'll love you for
eternity. ♥
Author notes
A simple little acrostic for the one who means more to me than anyone!! The last two lines are the first letters of our first names
Hope you like it!
I'm gonna say option 6 remove it if it doesn't fit!
Option 1 leslielovesthomas
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Now i normally dont like poems like this, but for soem reason i really do like it. I agree Razor-blade romance, this poem makes me think of my first love so well done for caputring my imagination and gd luck. x
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This one was a different and happy poem.
I like the use of the various emotions within this piece. It is both lifting and imagintive. Made me think of my first love actually. I love the natural responses within this poem.
Thanks for entry,
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This was a wonderful entry in the contest
Very Beautiful Writing
Best of luck to you in all your contests*grin
delila
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This is a very beautiful acrostic. It is such sweet heavenly bliss when you find the person you are which to spend the rest of your life and love with. Excellent job with this. It is truly amazing. Keep up the awesome work and keep that creativity blossoming and grow with the words of the heart and continue your journey to the exploration and voyage to your heart. Good luck to you and Thomas. I hope all works out with you two, and also good luck to you and your poem in this contest.
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Nice good luck
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Nice acrostic to explain the origin of your name! May you be blessed, and grow closer through the trials that come to mortality's children!
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Very nice. Well crafted and very sentimental. I wouldn't have thought to do this in the way you did
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Is he still in your life ? Are you still in love ? hope so ...Thank you for entering , storm
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This is very sweet. A great dedication as well. I love it. I wish you the best of luck and thank you for sharing
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Powerful
Oh my such a wonderful poem. So sweet and touching. Best of luck in the contest.
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This was a sweet piece although I'm not into acrostic really at all... not to say this wasn't good, just not my cup of tea. Thank you though for entering.
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Romantic hearts show in this poem, nice to be able to enjoy a poetic theme, thank you for the entry, good luck..MM
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Very wonderfully written poem. Interesting style. I loved the flow you had in your piece. Great word usage. My favorite line was 'One day making a creature or two of our love so pure and True.' Great write. Keep it up, and good luck in the contest!
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Very cute poem, well written. Keep up the good writing, good luck in this contest. xXx
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Aww this is cute. Thomas is a lucky man. I can feel your love for him. Nicely done to express how you feel. Thanks for entering and good luck to you.
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beautiful and charming Acrostic my fellow poet. It is a real joy to read such love in your words. great job and good luck in the contest.
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Awww, thats such a heartfelt, sweet poem and I liked how you did the acrostic!
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