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Gal, my sweet Gale

It is me
A new born
My sky wasn't so white
My eyes weren't so bright

You changed the way i smile
You changed the way my heart beats
I glide through streets
spreading my smile to everyone i meet

Yesterday when i was born
I got my horns
I ran across the rivers
I swimmed across the valleys

I am born today
with the wings of gay
I am tweeting all the day
I am blissing in my bay

Your smile make be breath
Your love make me live
Take me in your beauty
Gal; My sweet Gale

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This is the first poem on my love who changed my life

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    November 7, 2007

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    what a lovely poem for the one you care for...nice vusions within this post,thank you for the entry, good luck in our contest...mm


    • jebarson007
      November 14, 2007
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      Thanks

      Thanks for your comment. It is unfortunate that I couldn't win but this definitely gave me a chance to improve. Thanks again.