He has a face of an angel,
and a body of a Greek god.
My love for him is endless.
He looks at me with his hazel eyes,
and my heart skips a beat.
His speech to me is angelic.
When I am in his arms I am safe,
safe from an unknown world.
Together we live,
our love is eternal.
A contest entry
- Romantic Hearts (Show Your Emotions) ( Contest ) by misticmoonlite.
650 points, ended November 9, 2007, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Your Inspiration by N.W. Clerk.
1110 points, ended December 19, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I really liked how this piece, despite the brevity, has a completeness to it; a glance leads the way to impressing how special he is to you. Furthermore, the simple, straight forward writing adds a strong feeling of reality. Thank you for entering!
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another beautiful poem of pure romantic poetic love,keep it in your heart, thank you for the entry and good luck...MM
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Beautiful Write
What a wonderful write to the one you love and to share it with others. The picture says a million words between the lines of your poem, such love is awesome. The title My Angel is so very sweet and the first line He has a face of an angel and the last line Together we live, our love is eternal. Beautiful and excellent write, Thank you for sharing your gift to write poetry with me, Blessings Kelle Marie, stavykm
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