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The Killing Joke

I walked into the liquor store
And bought a bottle of dry gin
Said to the man behind the counter
"This is just one of those nights"

"It's all good," he said
Like a punchline to a killing joke
I exited the doors and laughed
Laughed so hard I had to sob

An hour before, I lied naked
Told a girl I needed penetration
"Do you really expect to fuck me
Just so quickly like that?"

I turned away on my side
"Can we please talk?" I asked
"What should I say?" she replied
"Nothing. Please, let's talk," I said

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  • Abby Eyeball
    November 19, 2007
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    the last line leaves me baffled. the entire piece somehow interests me, though.

    Abby Eyeball