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Do You See That Girl Right There?

do you see her
the one with the golden long hair
do you want to be her
then go with her to her evil rich lair

she could use a true friend
don't you think
she's the pretty and popular kind
so quick to make you want to sink

our parents are old friends
so i've seen her ruin her mom's bag by using it to hurl
she seems so high and mighty
but she's just another poor little rich girl

she is poor but not in a money way
she walks through life with no sense of time
always has bought her way out of everything in life
never learned any real skills for her to use as handholds when she climbs

she never did any charity work for someone who needed it
she never knew what is was like to have someone in need smile at her
she never helped an old lady cross a street
she never experienced the thing all people truly are
gratitude

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  • iheartjohnlennon
    November 6, 2007
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    I really like this poem. It shows an understanding of society today, which is something that is harder and harder to find. I look forward to reading more of your poetry in the future. Good luck!


  • BonaFidePoet
    November 6, 2007

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    OOOPPPSSS forgot the applause! BTW I love how you strung together the fact that even if you have everything, you might not be really living


  • BonaFidePoet
    November 6, 2007
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    I like it a lot!!!!