Bed cuddled in white foam
as passion respires my women
through the love of him
sending sweet water to
his desires does my soul,
beating softly as a puddle
does when touched
air cushioned with sweet petals
I float upon this breeze
as whispers drips
from his ear to my heart,
burgeoning serene sounds
like a stream rushed into
the mount
I try to grasp his words
Like a rose placed on his lips
as we brawl with tongue
to find new love
his love feels
upon my soul
kindly
like a hand
does to a lovely face
when it gazes
Yes, he kisses my inside
softly
as I kiss his
with a true heart
the air still sways
our breathe
as stars does upon shine
drifting upon
the wings of our
wondrous breathe
sent from God’s wondrous
cherubs
as they glide in sounds
that both our heart doth here
inside
feelings felt inside
instantaneous
feel as passion
grows new buds
of love
as love
creates
passionate
embers
so that we both
are hushed
underneath
the comfort
of our sway...
Author notes
The reader must read it slowly. A passionate kiss between my man and me. Feelings that I wrote I think that I wanted with a man.
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550 points, ended December 8, 2008, 35 entries
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Beautifully written thank you so much for your entry and good luck in the contest.
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Thanks for your entry and good luck!
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Different, but still so very sweet. I like your style, it's very unique. Thank you for your entry, keep writing in this way. Loves!
Cj
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Very beautiful piece..written with so much passion..thank you for joining my contest and best of luck
Amarige
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It lives up to the title of the poem. Passionate indeed. Great individual lines throughout, and good flow for the most part. Thanks for the entry!
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bravo
Some interesting and intriguing phrasing here, Aurielle...heartfelt words, indeed... bravo... bravo...
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This is Incredible there. OOO, I so love this one. Very fancy, creative and much more. I hope this one is written for me. But this part is definitely not about me.
So how
when with another man
Must I forget this.
I am sure everyone who reads this will quickly catch on feeling
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