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Envious fingers went to war
furiously jousting for hand
one would be vanquished
seen no more, left and rightly so.


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  • Luna Tique Fringe
    November 7, 2007
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    Ha! Very clever...wonderful take on the prompt.


  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    November 7, 2007
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    this is very different!

    All my best in the contest!


  • crimsondew
    November 6, 2007
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    Love this take..very interesting..All the best!


  • delightfulmess silver member
    November 6, 2007

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    I truely liked this take. very original
    Best of luck to you in the contest.


    Delila

  • Suzanne Dia
    November 6, 2007
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    OMG, you made me smile. Not an easy feat today

    Very clever. Thank you.

  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    November 6, 2007
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    Good luck in the contest!! Great write

    Becks

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