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Foundation

Renovate my reveries,
Nevermore measured by money.
Tender devotion now drives my dreams.
Staring in your stare,
Self-reliance sleeps.

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This a 20 word poem...
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  • HaleyMary
    November 6, 2007
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    Good write. It made me think of how there are more important things in life than money, like love and friendship. I like that you wrote it as a twenty word poem, too. You seem to be writing in a creative and experimental way lately. Keep up the great work.