Twinkle twinkle little stars once used to bring your words
Moon used to peep inside me
So that he can see the light of your love
That lightens my entire world.
Twinkle twinkle little stars come to me no more
For they have nothing from you to me now
You have taken away the entire world with you
And I am left here all alone abondoned.
You are gone taking away all the memories,
Taking away my entire world within you,
So I learned to live without you
You are not with me so-
I let the pleasure provoking pain become my companion.
The pain that you gave, will linger in me till eternity
Damp destroyed dreams talk to me, soothe my wounds by making them pain
and bring smile in my lips by making me cry.
For you and your love
I suffocate, suffer, live and die
Each day of my life.
My life becomes pleasant to me like the full moon in the sky
As you have adorned it with pains that are just for me from you.
Now don't try to separate this pain from me
Me and pain, we complement each other
I will not complain ever.
But without this pain I will die
because without it nothing of you is left with me
And without this pain my world seems swallowed story of silence
So baby let me live with this pain
Pain, that is distinctively you,
Give me pain, make me cry, leave me with your memories
So that I can live to love.
A contest entry
- Open Wounds by Eugene Cash Hensley.
700 points, ended November 26, 2007, 19 entries
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Wonderful
Very expressive and so well crafted. A wonderful creation. Thank you for sharing, best of luck in the contest.
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Thanks a lot for reading it.
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I really liked the lines - For you and your love
I suffocate, suffer, live and die... I got abit confused with - soothe my wounds by making them pain... otherwise its really good -
Really a good poem, I liked it very much. The sad feelings are bursting out with each word in this poem, brilliant work. Keep it up.
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You addressed a baby that too with the popular poem we all hear in our childhood.Very nice flowing verse i read from my sweetest sister that keeps my day enlivened. I wish that sweet voice flowing
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