walking in the rain
my clothes and backpack are soaked
stupid weatherman
A contest entry
- Rainy Day Haiku by azure85.
600 points, ended November 10, 2007, 51 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Last line clinches it, providing a twist and a turn that make the first two delightful. Well done.
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Thanks! I really appreciate that!!!!
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Stupid weatherman I hear ya on this one.... don't know why we bother to listen to them at all, we could walk outside and have a better idea.. lol great piece goodluck in the contest
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I know! Thanks good luck to you too!!!
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walking in the rain
my clothes and backpack are soaked
stupid weatherman
Oh, this one made me laugh-those weathermen are still trying to tell us when it is going to rain. A good rainy day haiku, thank you so much.
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Yeah I know! I wish I got paid as much as they do to get the weather wrong! Thanks I'm glad you liked it!!!
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thats funny
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thanks! I'm glad you liked it!!!!!
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This is good. It sends emotions and thoughts that you have. I hope to read more like this keep up the good work.
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actually I was just trying to be funny, but thanks I appreciate it a lot!!!
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